Friday, March 19, 2010

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2 comments:

  1. Dania ShapiraMarch 21, 2010 at 9:12 PM

    Hi Maria,

    It is very interesting to learn about things with which I am not familiar. I just wished you had the whole article spaced equally (more space), because it was very difficult for me to follow the lines.

    Thanks,

    Dania

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  2. Scott ZarambaMarch 31, 2010 at 11:04 AM

    The post about technological distractions during Mass is interesting and has links to pertinent websites. It feels, however, a little underdeveloped. Talking to churchgoing Catholics at BU might have improved it greatly. As it is, the post feels like a short lead, and the video used as illustration is dead. There's nothing to justify the headline.

    There's also some repetition between posts: only so many times can you say that the main traditions of Lent/Ash Wednesday are almsgiving, fasting, and prayer.

    Finally, in what order were the posts supposed to be? I see you published them at roughly the same time--it looks like you tried to work against the platform's typical last-post-first system.

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